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yey! second whachamacallsit anyway this is an amazing story

and its not because ive known you for a while. im being sick honest. how you stick to the areas culture by using names and the language (with the translations) is brilliant. the idea of his father not bearing to look at him because of his eyes and oh my god that ending, its just so sad. i may be a pretty bad story witter (im better drawing than writting) but i know a good story when i cant stop reading. and this just did that.

as for the non lp'er story (which is this story), we both know its a good idea to stay at what your good at as well as starting new things.
so keep it up. cant wait to see more of this stuff :D
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